2019年公共英语五级作文范文类型：你的观点
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五、你的观点 题目范例： Many people think that nowadays people are being subjected to more and more pressure in their work, and thus are having less and less time to relax. What’s your opinion? 范文解析： 范文(使用多种技巧) In modern society, especially in big cities, hard work has undoubtedly become a very important feature of ordinary people’s everyday life. It seems that many people are under the impression that their work is becoming more pressing and urgent, and thus they sacrifice more and more leisure time.重复已给信息，用另一种形式说。 In the first place, with the rapid development of science and technology, work today is more demanding than it used to be. For example, college graduates nowadays have to master English, computer science and driving skills before they can find decent jobs. People have to spend more time acquiring new techniques and skills. And their spare time tends to be fully occupied, not with leisure pursuits, but with work-related pursuits. In the second place, competition is becoming more intense. Many people feel anxious that they may be "laid-off" if they can’t work as hard as others. And they also feel at a disadvantage before new graduates. Therefore, it is understandable that people keep themselves involved in intensely hard work in order to preserve their positions. The worst aspect of this phenomenon, in my opinion, is that the huge pressure of work will gradually affect people’s mental health. Excessively hard work means that people can never get rid of the fatigue of their work, even in their leisure time. This means that they can not enjoy a normal life. In a word, in modern life overwork is stealing our leisure time. However, I believe this problem will be settled eventually with the development of science and technology. 解析： 文章的首段介绍场景并明确表态：我认为许多人工作压力很大，因而牺牲了很多的空闲时间。这是Your opinion类题目首段的典型写法，这类题目在首段必须表明自己的观点并在主体段落中进行论证。 主体段落从三个角度来分析人们工作压力大的原因，每一个原因写一个自然段，每一段的开头都有衔接手段in the first place,in the second place,last but not least这些衔接手段使文章脉络分明，层次清晰。人们工作压力大首先是科技发展的需要，其次是因为竞争曰益激烈，最后一点是工作压力已经逐渐影响了人们的心理健康。 结尾段对主体段落进行总结，in a word(总而言之)，再次重申自己的观点：现代社会巨大的工作压力已经占据了我们的空闲时间。但结尾段的最后一句话对解决这一问题表示一种乐观的态度，我相信随着科技的发展这个问题会得以解决。这句话并不是画蛇添足，反而显得作者不是很武断，比较客观。 相关资料 |
