2014年6月大学英语六级写作备考试题(九)
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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled On Food Safety. You should write at least 150 words .following the outline given below. 1.接连发生的食品安全问题引起大家的密切关注，比如牛奶问题、鸡蛋问题等; 2.请分析一下食品安全的重要性; 3.你认为相关部门应采取什么措施加强食品安全。 On Food Safety 【正确答案】： On Food Safety [1] The problem of food safety has attracted much attention recently. [2] Everyone is astonished at the news that thousands of babies suffered from serious health problems because they had been fed with some poisonous milk products. [3] The issue of food safety is so important that we cannot afford to ignore it. [4] For one thing, food safety concerns the well-being of all the people in the country. As is shown in the poisonous milk powder case, unsafe food does great harm to the health of consumers. [5] For another, failure to ensure the safety of food causes damage to the image of our government, especially when such food is exported to other countries. [6] Furthermore, unsafe food can undermine consumers’ confidence in the food industry, which may cause disastrous effect to our economy. [7] Therefore, it is high time that our government should take all measures to make sure that all the food in our country is safe to eat. The government must strictly carry out food safety standards, and impose severe punishment on those who violate them. 【答案解析】 [1] 按照英文行文习惯，直接点明主题。 [2] 列举实例，说明食品安全问题的严重程度。 [3] 段落的主题句。 [4] [5] [6] 用:For one thing„For another„ Furthermore列举需要重视食品安全问题的原因。 [7] 总结全文。it is high time that„句型用于呼吁有关单位采取行动。take measures，impose pun-ishment on等都是亮点短语。 [写作指南] 根据写作提纲，本文的写作思路如下: 第一段介绍食品安全问题的现状，说明目前社会上存在严重的食品安全问题，指出该问题已经到了不容忽视的地步。 第二段主体部分从三个角度分析食品安全问题的重要意义:食品安全事关人民的身体健康;食品安全事关政府、国家的国际形象;食品安全事关国家产业竞争力。因此，我们必须要重视食品安全问题。 第三段呼吁有关部门采取措施加强食品安全管理，如严格执行食品安全标准，加强市场监管力度，对出现问题的企业从重处罚以起到震慑效果等。 [句型变换] [1] 1. The problem of food safety has attracted much attention recently. 2. More and more people have been concerned about the issue of food safety recently. 3. Recently there has been a heated discussion on the topic of food safety. 4. Much has been discussed recently concerning the food safety problem. [3] 1. The issue of food safety is so important that we cannot afford to ignore it. 2. The issue of food safety is of critical importance and it must be brought into our attention. 3. The food safety problem is so important that we must pay close attention to it. 4. The food safety problem is so important that it must be dealt with properly. [4] [5] [6] 1. For one thing... For another... Furthermore... 2. First... Second... Finally... 相关资料 |
