2018年雅思写作模拟试题：自然资源减少
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2018年雅思写作模拟试题：自然资源减少 【能源类】 World’s natural resources such as oil，forests and fresh water are consumed at an ever-increasing rate, what are the causes and how to solve it? 世界的自然资源例如石油，森林，淡水在日益减少，原因何在，如何解决? 解析：at an ever-increasing rate v以愈来愈快的速度 如何打造高分作文： 盖楼房：图纸：谋篇布局 + 思路拓展 原料：精准词汇 + 学术句型 分析问题解决问题话题布局图： 首段：背景介绍(个性开篇) + 问题影响(对于国家，企业，个人)+写作目的(清晰表达) 二段：问题原因的展开：(客观上 + 主观上)(社会原因 + 家庭原因 + 个人原因) 三段：解决策略的展开：(政府做;媒体做;企业做;家庭做;个人做) 尾段：再次亮明观点 + 总结理由(强调协调努力) 【点评】：托福写作是经常提问是否……是解决问题的最佳的途径，这就和雅思写作的分析问题及解决问题相似了。 例如：The best way to learn about a foreign country is to read newspapers and magazines from that country?Do you agree or disagree?(托福题库) 假如给我一套模板： 首段：背景介绍 +写作目的 Never has …… in our community been as severe as it now is. …… is soaring at an alarming rate, for reasons which are not easily explained. This essay will attempt to discover some of the reasons and explore some possible solutions. 填空词汇： 1. energy crisis n能源危机 2. various depletion of natural resources n 各种各样能源的消耗 二段：三个原因的展开： One the of most contributing factors of …… could be attributed to …… By that I mean, ……Still, …… often exert great negative influence on ……, because……Last, …… is also the root cause of ……，…… 三段：解决策略的展开： Considering the seriousness of the issue, it is imperative to implement some practical solutions. First，the government should give priority to ……. More precisely, to enact relevant legislations to……. Further, much emphasis should be put on strengthening publicity, for it will aid us in fostering……. Last, …… must take every step necessary to …… 尾段：总结全文：强调协同努力; Only when the government, society and every family join hands in resolving the issue will we …… 点评：政府做;媒体做;企业做;个人做…… 出题背景：中国在建设节约型社会的背景下。 【思路拓展】： 1. 需求增加——满足需求——依赖高科技产品和利用自然能源 2. 意识缺乏——宣传教育——提高环保和节能意识 3. 利用不合理——资源浪费——合理布局 点评：水污染;森林砍伐; 【原创语料库】： 1. almost uses up the world fuel resources v 几乎用尽了世界的燃料资源 2. …… lead to energy crisis v导致能源危机 3. consume the energies and resources v 消耗能源和资源 点评：主语就是各种交通工具和现代化建筑。 回答Wendy 提问：为何建筑消耗木料，因为每个房子的装饰都是需要做吊顶的。 4. Alarmingly，we, human beings, are now facing a series of resource-related problems such as water scarcity or various depletion of natural recourses although our economy keeps on increasing. 具有讽刺意味的是，尽管我们的经济在不断攀升，但是，我们人类却面对着一系列和能源相关的问题例如水源短缺以及自然资源的消耗。 【点评】：个性开篇;首段亮剑。 5. Ironically, the history of the development of economic development is also a history of man’s increasing destruction of nature. 具有讽刺意味的是，经济发展的历史也是人类不断破坏自然的历史。 解析：Ironically adv 具有讽刺意味的是…… 6. Alarmingly，the depletion of natural resources has long been a problem of great concern and complaint in many cities around the globe. 在世界上，很多国家抱怨和关注的问题之一就是自然资源的消耗。 【点评】：切题的开篇句 相关资料 |
