2019年1月26日雅思写作考试回忆及解析
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2019年1月26日雅思写作考试回忆及解析 TASK 1 题目：The table below shows the improvements in medical care in three different European countries between 1980 to 2000. 类型：表格题/动态图 考点/写作要点： 1. 时态：过去时; 2. 该题数据很多，可以先看总体趋势，基本上病人的数量和医院床位都呈上升趋势，住院时间呈下降趋势; 3. 其次可以进行各项之间数据的趋势比较(max/min/倍数/分数)，英国的病人数量是三个国家中最多的，在2000年刚好是澳大利亚的三倍; 4. 三个国家住院时间下降的趋势相似，值得注意的是在1990-2000年期间，美国的医院病床数量增加的趋势最快，其次是澳大利亚。 范文： The table provides information about changes in the number of patients, average stays and beds in England, the US and Australia, as a result of improvements in medical system over two decades (1980-2000), It is noticeable that because of the improvements in medical care, all three countries had shown a decrease in the number of patients over the 20 years. The same trend could be found in the days of staying in hospitals. Meanwhile, there was an increase in the number of hospitals beds in the three countries mentioned above. When comparing the number of patients, it is clear that the UK held the highest figure, while the number was the lowest in Australia. By the end of 2000, there were around 260,000 of patients staying in the hospitals in England. However, in Australia, the figure was just one third that of England in the same year. Though the number of patients in the US was smaller than that of UK, the two figures both showed an upward trend from 1980 to 2000. Another noticeable change is that in both the US and Australia, the number of beds increased dramatically by 5000 and 3000 respectively from 1990 to 2000, comparing to the change in England, with only a growth of 1000 in the same decade. (215 words) TASK 2 Some people believe that women should play an equal role as men in a country’s police force or military force, while others think women are not suitable for these jobs. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 机经版本： 题目类型：双边讨论 话题：男女平等 TA/TR(key words)： 思路/提纲：
范文： Gender inequality is still a defining aspect of law enforcement, even in today’s world of slowly increasing employment fairness. Women comprise only a small percentage of the local law enforcement in agencies across the all nations, and most of them hold clerical positions. In fact, women play an important role in the national force. For starter, the society requires female army to demonstrate its equality in gender issue, providing citizens with all prospective opportunities in personal choice of career. This given law also improves the social balance in relationship between male and female employees and sets a role model for other jobs as well. Secondly, modern warfare has now filled with advanced devices so that we are no longer worrying about the physical incapability of women in comparison to men. Thus, higher education and training allow them to master theses skills as well as men. In addition, some particular jobs are better done by women, including nurses and doctors in the battle field. They are proved better in caring injuries and treating the wounded. However, we have to admit that there is a gender difference between male and female soldiers in the actual warfare, where males perform more active and efficient in combat with enemies. The rule that women are not allowed in the frontline is never a discrimination or gender inequality but is a protection to women. Similar conditions apply when we consider men with different levels of combat abilities, because we always choose the strongest for the battle field and the notion of gender is never an issue. In conclusion, I believe that it is surely reasonable for females to play a role in modern army but in actual combat, we use the best without gender consideration. (289 words) 相关资料 |
