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2005年真题
Directions:
Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should first describe the drawing the interpret its meaning, and give your comment on it.
You should write neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2.(20 points)
2005年第二篇作文依然采用了图画作文的形式。题目为养老“足球赛”，画的四角均有一个足球门，守门的是一个老人的四个子女：大儿子、二儿子、小儿子和小女儿。画的中间是一个蜷缩成一团的老人，呈球型，代表球。作文要求与以往的图画作文相似：先描述图画，再谈看法。这篇文章主要批判有些子女不赡养父母，将父母像踢足球一样踢来踢去。同第一篇作文一样，它的命题形式也没有给一个明确的三段式提纲，也是用一句话来表述，描述图画、解释寓意和对图画进行评论。但是，我们可以非常容易的看出这实际上还是一种“三段式”的逻辑思维方式。这篇作文从命题的角度来看反映了三个特点：主题具有一定的普遍性、中心思想相当明确、考生有话可说。
在实际写作中要注意：不要把养老足球赛上的场面进行过分细节化的描述，因为画面上是三个儿子，一个女儿，一个老父亲五个人，如果每个人写上一句话，就占到160-200词儿的一大部分，显然这是不明智的。但是也不能走上另外一个极端，就是基本上不描述，只是泛泛而谈。根据教育部以往评分的标准来看，图画描述不够将会被扣分。
核心的段落，应该是在第二段。第二段就是把这幅漫画的意图要说清楚，说明它给我们带来的思考。我们要通过现象看本质，为什么会是这样？这些年轻人到底怎么了？这些老年人为什么会是现在这种状况呢？人都是要老的，是不是会让我们意识到一点，我们现在如此对待老年人，把他像足球一样踢来踢去，如果假设真是这样的话，那这个老年人的今天也有可能就是你自己的明天，这些都是有感而发的。
第三段可以对这件事情发表评论，也可以写成你的一些建议，如何解决这个社会问题等。
经典范文赏析
The picture symbolically depicts how three sons and a daughter treat their old, helpless father. They each stand in a different corner of a football field in the middle of which is the old man who is crouching. The eldest son kicks out the father and the other children are prepared to ward him off. It is sad to see none of them is willing to receive their father.
The picture is thoughtprovoking, and what it illustrates is a common phenomenon in todays society: many grown-up children refuse to support their aging parents. They regard them as a burden to live with although it is their duty to support parents when they grow up. I think these children have betrayed their own conscience and therefore may subject themselves to social contempt and criticism.
It is no doubt that this phenomenon is becoming common in modern society, but it is not a good manner for young people to imitate. Most parents devote all their lives to bring up their children. They give their children everything they have just because of love and hope. It is against nature for us to shirk the responsibility of taking care of our parents when they are old. Rather, we have the duty to pay back their love by making their later years enjoyable and happy.
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