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四、每日佳作赏析
Directions : For this part , you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Your Attitude Towards Criticism . You should write at least 120 words , and base your composition on the outline given below in Chinese :
1.每个人都可能会受到别人的批评。
2.不同的人对待批评的态度是不同的。
3.你怎么看待别人对你的批评。
范文
Every one of us may be criticized by others in our life . (1) For example , (2①) workers who fail to accomplish their tasks may be criticized by their employer ; (2②) students who have poor performance in exams may be criticized by their teacher and parents .
(3) However , attitudes towards criticism (4) differ from person to person . (5①) Some people will become annoyed , and will try to defend themselves (6) by all means . (5②) Some people may (7) be indifferent to criticism . They just regard criticism as nonsense . (5③) But other people accept criticism modestly and find their shortcomings from others' criticism , (8) who (9) tend to (10) stand a good chance of success .
As for me , I welcome others' criticism . I have always believed that old Chinese saying (11) " Good medicine that tastes bitter will help one's illness " . In my opinion , (12) though criticism will make us unhappy , it can help us know our shortcomings and inadequacy . Therefore , we should (13) place more emphasis on others' criticism , (14) instead of being annoyed with or (15) turn a deaf ear to it .
点评
(1)举例说明。
(2)排比句，结构相同，增加气势。
(3)转折引出对批评的不同态度，使上下文过渡自然，衔接紧密。
(4)意为“各人不同”。
(5)列举了不责骂人的不同态度。
(6)意为“尽一切办法，务必”。
(7)意为“无动于衷，漠不关心”。
(8)who引出非限制性定语从句。
(9)意为“易于……，有……倾向”。
(10)意为“很有可能，大有机会”。
(11)引用谚语“良药苦口利于病”。
(12)though引出让步状语从句。
(13)意为“更加强调或重视”。
(14)意为“而不是”。
(15)意为“充耳不闻，置之不理”。
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