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四、学会使用动态动词
动态动词往往经be , ther be , make , need等静态动词更有活力，可以达到更好的写作效果。
如：
原句：Please try our best to help this girl , help her to pass the most difficult period in life , and make her financial burden less and less .
优化：Please try our best to help this girl , help her to pass the most difficult period in life , and relieve her financial burden .
原句：Each day , we can see there are a lot of foods in the garbage cans .
优化：Each day , we can see many students dump foods in the garbage cans .
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