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名师：2014年9月27日雅思写作范文 今天的表格题很简约，9组数据。趋势也一目了然。
建议：考生需要仔细研究评分标准。小作文7分，6分和5分的区分点在评分标准第一项task achievement 中有清晰的区别，即：好的文章需要有明显的趋势。我把趋势段放在了文中第二段。 Task 1 table
Word count: 163
Sample Answer:
The table compares changes in the number of cars manufactured in three different countries, namely, Argentina, Australia and Thailand in the years 2003, 2006 and 2009.
It is noticeable that the figure for Argentina increased considerably over 6-year period, whereas a significant fall in car output can be seen in Australia. Overall, Thailand had by far the largest number of vehicles in all three years.
In 2003, over 160,000 automobiles were manufactured in Argentina, and this figure rose to more than 510 thousand in 2009, an increase of 350,000. By contrast, although Australia produced the second largest number of vehicles (approximately 530,000) among three countries in the year 2003, the figures were the lowest in 2006 and 2009, with 345,000 and 225,000 respectively.
On the other hand, Thailand is a main producer in terms of car manufacturing. Nearly 80,000 cars were sold in the market, and this figure reached its peak in 2006, at approximately 120,000, but decreased slightly afterwards (below 100 thousand).
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