2017年3月4日雅思考试写作回忆(网友版)
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A类 小作文：流程图smoked fish的制作/熏鱼 大作文：many young people leave school with negative attitudes towards learning why?reason? how to encourage positive attitude G类：小作文：找个人一起度个假， 大作文：孩子要不要在学校画画 澳洲A类小作文：地图 大作文 some people think financial aid from international organizations is important for developing countries. Others believe that practical aid and advice is more important. Discuss. 附：2014年小作文流程图熏鱼写作范文 流程图难度不大，只要看懂步骤，按一般套路写作即可。 这道题也有考察同学们对生活的留意程度，见过剖鱼和熏鱼的同学应该能根据尝试很快理解图画。 题目总共有八个步骤，关键在于对步骤进行分类。在范文里将1,2,3,4归为一个段落，因为都是描述制作熏鱼之前的准备，5,为一段，是从鱼变成熏鱼的过程，6,7和8为第三段，描述了熏鱼制作完成后的分类运输。当然，有其它的分类方法也可。不过以不超过四段为宜。 小作文要客观，有什么就写什么，切记主观推断。 感谢提供流程图的高人，因为图为手绘，范文仅供参考。 Sample Answer The flow diagram indicates eight steps of making smoked fish. The first step is killing fish and then emptying the fish. The second step is to preserve fish in salt and water, which will cost thirty minutes. Then, fish will be fired for five minutes before putting them into a fish bucket. The first four steps provide a good preparation for the fifth step and also the most important process which is called smoking. The fish bucket is made of wood. The burning coal is at the bottom of the whole bucket, and covered by a layer of sawdust.The space between sawdust and the top of bucket is packed with fish. After the smoking step, all fishes will be divided into two types. One type is smoking fish which will be packed in boxes and the other type will be further processed by yellow coloring and then packed into buckets. Finally, all the boxes and buckets will be loaded into trucks. 相关资料 |
