2013年8月24日雅思写作范文
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2013年8月24日雅思考试全科回忆及解析 小作文：柱状图 比较两个bar chart. 第一个是average retired age for men in 2004 and 2008 in seven different countries第二个是average retired age for women in 2004 and 2008. 写作思路：动态图，主体分2段，男女各一段。先国家之间进行对比，同时描述各个国家的趋势。最后一段写男女对比。 大作文：Some people think that in this modern world people are getting dependent of each other. Others think the modern world gets people more independent of each other. Discuss both views and give your own opinions. independence dependence 1 家庭成员的独立性 2 师生之间的独立性 1 对社会服务的依赖 2 对朋友同学的依赖 3 对同事工友的依赖 With the advancement in telecommunications, the way (that) people maintain their relationship is going through a dramatic change. From some people’s perspective， they become more dependent on each, while from other’s perspective, the opposite trend occurs. (定语从句，对比从句) People can do many things alone in modern society. A working woman can handle all the housework by herself thanks to various household appliances. The elderly are taken care of in a nursing home instead of being a burden on their family. Teenagers are even sent abroad to pursue their education alone. Obviously people rely less on their families. Meanwhile distance learning through the internet allows some students who are not able to physically attend a school to access education. This means that students are less dependent on real world teachers. Few people have contacts with their neighbours in major cities where people are constrained in high-rise buildings and hardly have the opportunity to say hello to those who live next door. (被动句，动名词，宾语从句，状语从句) On the other hand, people increasingly rely on each other in some aspects of relationships. Why many young international students can live overseas without their family is in thanks to various public social services, such as house renting agencies and a variety of cafés that usually line along the streets of large cities. It is those strangers who are actually allowing people to live independently. It seems obvious that the dependence on family members is shifting to outsiders. Due to the decrease in birth rates and divorce, children without siblings become more dependent on their peer playmates or classmates to share their happiness and/or sadness. Actually young people become even closer than before because modern telecommunication tools, such as cell phones and the Internet, enable them to keep in immediate touch with others. The most dependent relationships seem to be in the business where people in different sectors of companies, closely interact with one another in either cooperative or competitive fashion. (主语从句，定语从句，强调句，形式主语，对比句，原因状语从句) Overall, I would like to conclude that human beings by nature are willing to share, support and care for each other. Independence is just a superficial phenomenon at the heart of dependence. Family is always the most important emotional support and teachers are always the key to education. (宾语从句，并列句) 词汇拓展 1. maintain 保持 2. go through 经历 3. perspective 视角 4. handle 处理 5. household appliance 家电 6. nursing home 养老院 7. pursue 追求 8. rely on 依赖 9. physically 亲自 10. constrain 限制 11. agency 中介 12. shift 变化 13. superficial 表面的 14. sibling 兄弟姐妹 15. peer 同龄人 16. keep in immediate touch 随时保持联系 17. sector 部门 18. by nature 本质上 19. willing 乐意 20. divorce 离婚 相关资料 |
